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July 21, 2012
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I know I've said this before, but this game needs another redesign. The code is so messy now that updating is harder and harder every time. Now that I've learned a bit of ActionScript 3, I'm slowly porting the game to a new engine, much easier to work with, and doing little changes as well.

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it looks really good but you have to create more specific comands
and you have some little bugs when jujmp over chaat if you don't do the write thing... you must check them because are really annoyng
anyway, it's look great, and i think it will look really aswome if you'll make it color
from my side it look pretty well and ideea even it's comune in this case look really original
and now i write that phrase to can have that number o words :D
that is it, I just hope that what i said is helpfull :)) that's it
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Clearly still a work in progress but with an interesting wide scope to it. Its early but you can see where its headed. I especially like the open world feel. Holding the box even though my characters mind said bedroom I went and explored the house.
However this brings me to my first issue. There was no way for me to know I could look around with the arrow keys and for the longest time I found myself going in and out the front door not sure what to do. Having a prompt with button commands I think would be most useful. Another thing I noticed was the press "space to continue" in the corner was just barely legible and I think needs to be boulder to stand out in someway so the player can more quickly understand that's what they need to do. I sorta found myself flipping through channels much longer than needed to looping 3-4 times before I noted the "Press space to continue"
All In all the is amazing scope for a project and a good demo to show where it can and will likely go. I cannot wait to see where this can go.
You keep us updated on progress and We'll keep you updated on areas we believe could use touch ups that could use a little work. Keep up the amazing work.
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one note. the $ after the number will make people think of Peso not Dollar.
you should have the NES work to
Cool Demo ...^.^
Gab1231 Feb 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I saw that thing on the news... "My little pony coulses 100 deats each day."
Matojeje Feb 20, 2014  Student Digital Artist
You have got a little typo, it's "Delivery man: Good morning, sir! I've a package for..." - the I've package part
I have a feeling the default name is a reference to Adventure Time(Finn and Jake).
lol "my little pony causes 100 deaths every month"
RainbowPandaPenguin Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I was just randomly clicking fair and unfair on critigz
Nice work overall, well done! I think you should try to limit it to a certain extent meaning not to make it huge, I have failed in a couple of projects due to making them super complex, so I only make accesible games for my own power, not meaning like making silly games, but you should try that way and you will success, keep up =)
Finish it Please!
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