I'm a lover of POV TG's along with non-mental changing TG's so it's no surprise that I find this awesome. The POV parts were spot on, maybe a little edit to eye movement in the mirror, but aside from that I can't say much negative. I kind of wish that it never left 1st person view, but at the time I can see the need to exit it because of the bodily changes that would go unnoticed. Glad to see that you are still working on it, and I can't wait to see more, wish I had points to donate!
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